You are doing exceedingly well with your memories Neera, and it is no surprise to read that you were an excellent student. It took me until I left school to start doing great things. 😁
Thank you Amie, for reading it and for telling me what you particularly liked. I was going to add a pearagraph at the end of each chapter asking readers what they particularly liked and where it can be improved. You provided me just that. I am grateful.
I particularly enjoyed the crockery memory. The scent of the chili fields, hunting for crockery shrapnel, the simple pleasure in repurposing it for your toy chest. Beautiful, Neera!
You are doing exceedingly well with your memories Neera, and it is no surprise to read that you were an excellent student. It took me until I left school to start doing great things. 😁
This is a beautiful story and very well told.
Thank you Amie, for reading it and for telling me what you particularly liked. I was going to add a pearagraph at the end of each chapter asking readers what they particularly liked and where it can be improved. You provided me just that. I am grateful.
I particularly enjoyed the crockery memory. The scent of the chili fields, hunting for crockery shrapnel, the simple pleasure in repurposing it for your toy chest. Beautiful, Neera!